The Enemy of the Good ([info]eideteker) wrote,
@ 2005-11-17 20:59:00
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Current mood:it's less than a mile away
Current music:Neil Young - Powderfinger (live)

Call him "22"
This is an e-mail I sent to jonmc, a MeFi celeb who's basically the incarnation of Rob Gordon (the guy in my icon, dummies). It's my take on the enigmatic song "Powderfinger" written by Neil Young.

I've been thinking about your Powderfinger thread (http://metachat.org/index.php/2005/10/18/powderfinger_by_neil_young) and I looked up this page again (http://www.thrasherswheat.org/fot/powderfinger.html). That guy Mark brings up a number of really good points, but he misses some.

Any particular story aside, it looks like (sounds like?) it's about a young man, alone, and having to make his own decisions ("you'd better call John" = "I don't think I can handle this alone"). The whole second verse is just about that. It's also about the legacy that you're led into. This guy's still living at home, hasn't struck out on his own. So he's something of a victim of his family's way of life/location/etc. He's got some bad wisdom been passed down to him by his family; they've told him to stand and fight, but he's a thinker (and a lover) not a fighter. "Never stopped to wonder why" is the force of tradition telling him what to do (and his father's words). Who knows? In a different life, this kid could've been at college when this happened.

I think a big part of this is the influence of the older generation on the individual. Whether law and order or parents, this kid's (I say kid, myself just 25!) a victim of external forces. What sticks out at me is that they shoot first. It seems like some kind of government vessel (the "deliver the mail" line suggests that it looks like an official boat). So he's sandwiched between corrupt law enforcement (they shot first! that still gets me. Bastards) and his family's way of life, when he should be worrying about the things a normal red-blooded 20-something is worried about (hence the line "remember me to my love"). A war-like society creates a vacuum as the older men die and the younger are forced to take their place prematurely. He never even had a chance, as the guy on that website said.

He also said "If anything, 22 is a *victim* of Powderfinger". Powder on the finger comes from firing a gun, of course. He's living somewhere where things are ruled by gunfire rather than the kind of thinking he's used to doing. Like I said, in another world, he might've had a chance. He's the kind to solve his problems with thought and discussion living in a world where violence rules the day. He was right, I think, where in 3.9 he says "protect me from "protect from a society where accounts have to be settled with guns, where lawlessness parades as the law; protect me from my fate; protect me from dying." But then he doesn't get the line "Cover me with the thought that pulled the trigger". This seems obvious to me (as a libertarian/anarchist); it's about paternalism (both in government and homelife, as I said above). The government that shot him did it "for his own good" (like in Cool Hand Luke; "Wish you'd stop being so good to me, Cap'n."). "Cover me" suggests that this "benevolent" thought behind this brutal action is supposed to comfort him like a blanket. Which is, of course, sarcastic coming from Neil (though 22 probably meant it; part of the reason why it took him so long to shoot is he was conflicted out of loyalty for family and gov't, the both of which ended up being the death of him when they clashed); the kid's dead so fat lot of good it did him.

It seems like an individualist dirge over the rise of governmental control and "traditional values". I know that "the powers that be" can be religious, but I've always thought of it in a political context (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_powers_that_be). If you add the religious element, then you've got a triple threat of "authority." Neil's lesson is that we ought not to put too much stock in the law or tradition (and possibly religion) and learn to think for ourselves or we'll end up "wonderin' what to do" when the first shot hits the docks where we live. "It's less than a mile away." I'll refrain from using the phrase "cautionary tale" because I already sound enough like That Pretentious Music Jerk. But I've listened to the song a bunch of times since you uploaded it and these few thoughts have been banging around inside my head. I thought I'd share, even if it's been awhile since you asked.

Thanks, man. I love a good mystery.

Yours in rock,
Eideteker

Thoughts? Dis/agreement?


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[info]contadina
2005-11-19 11:43 am UTC (link)
Thoughtful post. Did he ever respond?

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[info]eideteker
2005-11-19 07:13 pm UTC (link)
Not yet!

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[info]thomasvought
2005-11-23 04:02 pm UTC (link)
Hope I'm not being rude just posting here randomly, but...

I fiend to voice my disagree with whether or not the main character of the song was shot. Don't get me wrong; undoubtedly he is killed. But consider this verse;

"But when the first shot hit the docks I saw it coming
Raised my rifle to my eye
Never stopped to wonder why
Then I saw black
And my face splashed in the sky"

The image I always get from this verse is 22’s gun misfiring.
This enforces a "live by the sword, die by the sword" moral to the song that ultimately breeds the idea that weapons and violence are not the answer. The implications of this make the final verse even stronger;

"Shelter me from the powder and the finger
Cover me with the thought that pulled the trigger"

What thought made 22 pull the trigger?
Honor? Family values? Social Obligation?
Nationalism? Flag waving?
Pick one. It doesn’t matter what caused him to pull that trigger, the ultimate statement is that;
“I’m dead now. But remember what I died for. Cover my legacy with my intent.”
Does that make it all worth it? I don’t think so. The song says that 22’s life shouldn’t have been over yet, that essentially, he got fumed simply out of bad circumstance.
I just realized that this could be the story of an American soldier in Iraq with simple editing. Think of the military funerals;
“Cover my coffin with what made me pull the trigger”

I believe that the song is trying to get the message across that while the action of raising the gun was justified, it wasn't necessary and in this case was the catalyst for 22's demise.
And if the gun does misfire, it adds to that message that a weapon should only be used in the most extreme of circumstances--- because there’s always the chance that the weapon (any weapon) will work against you.
It could’ve just as easily been a knife or a nuke.

Anyway, thanks for the thoughts, and I do like you take on the song.

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[info]eideteker
2005-11-27 02:34 pm UTC (link)
Umm... no. It's the internet. Random posting is what it's all about! You bring up some good points, but I think at the end that we're agreeing. Whether a misfire or not, it was the gun that killed him.

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